Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about both views and give you opinion.
Playing sports is beneficial for one’s health and mind. Two different perspectives exist when it comes to the type of sports i.e. team sports and individual sports. This essay will explain merits of both types of sports and will provide an evidence as to why team sports is better.
Anything which includes multiple people doing same thing will automatically help a person to understand various mindsets, team sports is one of the example of it. When a person is playing in the team, he/she will learn a lot of qualities like team spirit, celebrating failures with smile, thinking from others perspective. If a team is playing, various roles and responsibilities are handled by various people, this will not improve the coordination of a person but also help to handle pressure and motivate others. Team sports lead to bonding and networking with other human from other places.
Individual sports like tennis or swimming let you be the decision maker of what you want to do and how to pursue that. It improves the focus power of a person as every other person in that game is his opponent. You have to play alone, practice alone and victory will be only of yours. These games let you handle pressure on your own and also helps you to create a bond with yourself.
In my opinion, Playing in teams is more beneficial and important. Several people competing to achieve one goal will not only encourage you to perform better but also let you to understand various techniques that one must follow to grow as a single person taking care of the growth of the team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55450954806 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6076917113 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196541963359 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855106509117 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804816949524 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129349869425 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418856723296 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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