Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
environmental problems are becoming one of the severe urban problems for the authorities of most cities around the world leading to many other difficulties like heart attacks, respiratory diseases, and so on. Research shows that 80% of the environmental problems are the result of the all-time high vehicles on roads. To address this issue, an argument is put forward by some short-sighted people that increasing the prices of oil can be a solution in this regard. however, I do not agree with this view.
raising the prices of petrol cannot be an appropriate answer to the problem of environmental pollution for many reasons. First, majority of cities face environmental problems because of car users as middle- and lower-class people prefer to commute by public transport. Now, the affluent class of the society will not be affected by higher fuel prices because they can afford it. Therefore, cars on the roads as well as environmental pollution both will not see a decline. Second, raising fuel prices put a great burden on the economy of country that imports oil. this not only widens gap between rich and poor countries but also can be a cause of innumerable problems.
What’s more, owing to globalization, every sector is interlinked in today’s world. so, increasing the cost of oil will increase the landing cost of essential items like fruits, vegetables. which will contribute in higher inflation across the world. Besides this, there are many more ways to curb the problem of environmental pollution like enhancing infrastructure, better public transport facilities, making people aware about the environment concerns. In addition to this, governments can avail vehicles, which run on renewable energy at competitive cost.
On the flip side, some people argue that raising fuel price will affect the spending capacity of commuters. this will oblige them to reduce the use of private vehicles and depend more on public transport. however, considering the benefits offered by private vehicles this does not seem to be the case.
To cap it up, I firmly believe that though, the argument about raising fuel prices has some credibility. but, to my knowledge it will not bring the desired results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22067039106 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8532791482 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572625698324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7888158691 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.45 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242782273154 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064995717457 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436496149007 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113070563138 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518517268091 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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