Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.
The difference between the child care given by childcare centres or grandparents, which was always a debatable issue has now become more controversial with many people claiming that childcare homes are better while others reject this notion and back the idea of keeping them home with their grandparents. The substantial influence of urbanization has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In the coming paragraphs, I would like to ponder upon both before giving my verdict on the same.
Though there are many benefits of childcare centers one can go on to list. I will concentrate on the ones that are the most important ones. First, these childcare centers are highly reputed private organizations that hire trained staff to take proper care of infants every day and even during emergency hours like a child getting hurt or sick. whereas grandparents owing to their old age, cannot give constant attention. Second, children are at a secure place where they face no danger from the outside world. What's more, toddlers are not likely to sit at a place. Therefore, daycares are the perfect place where toddlers can play with other toddlers or can indulge in brainstorming activities.
On the other hand, some people support the idea of keeping children home with grandparents. they say that grandparents provide love and warmth. In addition to this, they help to inculcate emotional intelligence in infants as well. Furthermore, chances of homesickness also get reduced when children stay at their homes with their family members.
Besides this, living at home with grandparents would also be beneficial for their health as grandparents provide food rich in nutritious value.
To recapitulate, I feel that both have their own benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, grandparents can provide more love and support whereas childcare centers can provide more care and activities. But, looking at the present scenario, I assert that daycares are more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, i feel, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.261829653 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82131114815 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596214511041 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1807494977 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170894425297 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04795259535 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419079927769 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996439916204 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293068063456 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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