Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.
cyberspace is being utilized by many people to find the remedies of their health issues. I deem it as an affirmative development because men and women do have not to squander their money for minor illness as well as they will gain knowledge which is very beneficial for them. This essay will further elucidate that how the internet is blessing for humans particularly to solve their medical problems.
Firstly, as we all know that medical treatments are very expensive nowadays and for less severe health problems visiting doctors may be an onus for the people who cannot afford it. Therefore, when people have facility to get information from hyperspace and accordingly, people will find less cheaper alternatives solutions to cure their health related issues. For example, one of my friends never goes to hospital for viral fever and flu, as he finds the curable measures from the internet and implement it for the betterment of his health. However, it is not always the same scenario with everyone because information given on the cyberspace is not a reliable source and people can fall into trouble due to inauthentic way of cure.
On the other hand, though people can get tons of websites regarding any subject, it is not confirmed that whatever available on the internet is always legit. Consequently, when people try to apply that methods in real life, it can ne dangerous for themselves. To exemplify, a survey in Times of India showed that more than 40% information available on the hyperspace regarding health is not reliable. Thus, people should first check that whether that information is legit or not and then after they should use it otherwise they may have to face an egregious situation.
In conclusion, it can be concluded that although people can cure health issues which are less perilous by getting information from the internet, sometimes they may fall into trouble due to untrustworthy source of knowledge. Furthermore, it is recommended that people should circumspect all the facets of source before implementing on anyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Cyberspace
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Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less cheap'?
Suggestion: less cheap
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09171597633 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78103518806 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0493295511 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4615384615 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190363408821 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707144083459 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414425086509 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118966544516 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479565488713 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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