The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is claimed that we should unify every government into only one international government. Though this can help to create a peaceful world, the demerits still outstrip the merit, especially in terms of supporting citizens and the loss of culture.
The world can become more peaceful if there is no conflict between nations. If everyone lives in the same country, alienation will be reduced, especially for anyone who enjoys traveling around the world. As a result, people do not need to demonstrate to protect their rights as every single person in this world will be treated equally. People can also connect to others easier and so on, connect the whole world.
However, the most difficult problem is to control citizens’ lives. The world is enormous and if 8 billion people are living in one country, the prime minister has to handle the same amount of work. Unsurprisingly, that person will be overwhelmed and many problems cannot be solved immediately and people may suffer a lot before the problem can be dealt with. In other words, this world will become extremely tough and it is hard to change.
Besides, if every nation is unified, then we may lose multi-cultural diversity, which is one of the greatest things of humans. When a country has developed cultures, naturally, they will attract other people to come and live, people lives will become prosperous, lead to the development of a whole country. But if we lose our culture, we may lose the attractiveness of each place and the world will get boring, everyone may lose the excitement to work and live, as there is nothing to entertain. Hence, the nation may develop slower and many people may live in poor if the nation’s economy standstill.
In conclusion, unifying all governments into one may benefit in one aspect but it creates more problems to handle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70794705294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0276773359 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159589673139 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578035909363 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521526335544 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099344455604 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406257491985 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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