Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent times, people have questioned if the treatment of celebrities by the media is unfair. While some people have asked if they need more privacy, others question if the invasion is a price they pay for their fame. I am of the opinion that lack of freedom is a consequence of being famous because of the role they play in the society.
On the one hand, there are almost daily evidences that shows that it is almost impossible to be popular and have a private life. In other words, celebrities are public figures who act as role models to a large percentage of the society particularly youths. Their actions are being replicated by their followers and therefore, the need to constantly ensure they do not influence the masses negatively. For instance, Nigerian musicians such as Davido, Wizkid and Naira Marley are role models to approximately 60% of Nigerian youths. Also, being fame comes with leadership expectation and good leaders should eschew exemplary traits in every area of their life. Consequently, the personal life of famous individuals need to closely watched in other to ensure they can truly lead the people in any capacity they can.
On the other hand, it should be known that people that are famous have families and are also humans like us; therefore the need to allow them have their privacy. Children from these homes sometimes become uncomfortable with such invasion, thereby affecting how they interact with the society. They often get withdrawn from expressing themselves and ultimately not being able to socialize. Thus, the need to give them privacy to ensure they can associate freely with the society. In addition, famous people sometimes live fake life because of the pressure of trying to handle fame. Ultimately, they might resort to crime to keep up with the pressure.
To recapitulate, while people may vary in their opinion, I believe that famous people are not unfairly treated by the media and need to be constantly followed because they act as role model to youths in the society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95894428152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59691949235 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524926686217 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9239179777 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281446794456 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916851510056 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610453845591 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192662323288 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312316841251 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.