Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to requir imformation about the Tertiary Preparation Certicate. If I possible I want to enroll in course as a part time student in 2013.
I left school 6 years ago after completing early childhood education. I have worked as a kindergarden teacher in Vancouver. Thesedays, many kindergarden is disappear. I think it mean I can not work lasting. That is why I want to change my area of expertise. I want to learn the department of Education to broarden my knowedge and creer. I have a plan to work elementary school after graduate in this school. I believe that I can teach to many kind of student.
Please send me the imformation as soon as possible, and tell me the dates for enrolling in the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
Your fathifully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to requir imformation about...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ossible I want to enroll in course as a part time student in 2013. I left school 6 years...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappeared'.
Suggestion: disappeared
...couver. Thesedays, many kindergarden is disappear. I think it mean I can not work lasting...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y school after graduate in this school. I believe that I can teach to many kind o...
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Line 4, column 438, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...s school. I believe that I can teach to many kind of student. Please send me the imfo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 137.0 315.596192385 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75912408759 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06484173084 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 176.041082164 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642335766423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1970989446 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.2727272727 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4545454545 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118878088265 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039057978986 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481629264704 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790618825613 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036797806118 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.