You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain why you are no longer using your bicycle.
describe your bicycle.
explain why you think your friend would like to have it.
Dear Anubav,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to sell my bicycle to you because I'm not using it any longer. The company which I joined recently, is far away from my home so it is not possible for me to go by cycle hereafter. Moreover, I often travel by bus or train to my office.
My bicycle is an old BSA model but I customised it when I was using it. The colour is metallic red and the handle bars are very comfortable to drive. The seat is a cushion type which is covered by synthetic leather. The wheels are made of alloy with five adjustable gears and it also has front and back disc brakes which would be perfect for a smooth and safe ride for long distances.
Though, I won't be using it any more, I decided to give it particularly to you. Because, I know that you are taking your car often to the supermarket that is just 6 kms from your house. You can use my cycle which could be more convenient while moving in the traffic and will also be a good exercise. I hope it could be very useful to you. Please let me know if you are interested to buy.
Waiting to hear from you.
Yours lovingly,
Felix
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| 2019-10-24 | felixalbon | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... like to sell my bicycle to you because Im not using it any longer. The company wh...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which is covered by synthetic leather. The wheels are made of alloy with five adju...
^^^
Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...decided to give it particularly to you. Because, I know that you are taking your car of...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22018348624 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26862110032 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9330404207 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3333333333 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273456386273 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986257540577 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903304640642 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149662006859 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797395357531 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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