your view on the permanent residental process. Include Advantage and disadvantage

Essay topics:

your view on the permanent residental process. Include Advantage and disadvantage

From the ancient day's people around the world, Either for a better life or the exciting new experience get migrate from their country to another. Even after the several decades, the base concept has not changed but it got improvised with the different names were one among called the Permanent residential process. In this essay, I will highlight a few advantage and disadvantage of this Permanent residential process and give my opinion on the same.

On the one hand, there are many steps to be followed by the applicant for the Permanent residential process. Being qualified in all the criteria, the applicant will become an eligible candidate. Not only, it enables to find a suitable candidate but also it proves that the candidate is genuine. Consequently, a candidate gains an added advantage for their dream job search, in their interested country.

On the other hand,time required to complete all the process is time-consuming. Being decided to apply for the permanent resident of another country candidate need long processing time. Even with all the Qualification to get all the process completed it will take more than a year. For example, even for the express entry for certain countries immigrant would take 6 to 7 months to land on the destination. Hence a good Quantity of time needs to spend on the completion of the process.

In Conclusion, for any person to immigrate to another country have to be compliant with various rules and regulations as it enables them to meet the eligibility criteria. Even though the process is time-Consuming, the wait time is worth obtaining the PR process.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few advantages'.
Suggestion: few advantages
...cess. In this essay, I will highlight a few advantage and disadvantage of this Permanent resi...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , time
...erested country. On the other hand,time required to complete all the process is...
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Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... even for the express entry for certain countries immigrant would take 6 to 7 months to l...
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Line 9, column 407, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...to 7 months to land on the destination. Hence a good Quantity of time needs to spend ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06741573034 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89258382739 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5966076379 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161667726852 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061621508682 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601338981997 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100309253124 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374491095845 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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