Agree or disagree: teachers should not provide their social and political views to their students
Effective teaching methods are the topic for many today discussions. Some people might think that it is not necessary for teachers to provide their social or political views to their students. However, I am of the opinion that it has a huge influence in in teaching quality.
To begin with, I strongly believe that by introducing social and political views to students, teachers could make their lectures more comprehensive and intriguing. To be more specific, it is a way of putting the knowledge into a broader context. From that, the students could easily get the big picture and have a more hoistic view of the issues they are learning. For instance, my geography teacher once used his social insights of the population growth to demonstrate how it should be controlled effectively. That delivery was so vivid that we felt so excited and understood the lesson better.
Secondly, the social and political views of the teachers would be an orientation for students in real life. In particular, because of the young age, students could not have as many experiences as teachers so they could learn more about reality through the talks of their teachers in class and use those knowledge to prepare better for their future. I am an evident example for this point. Thanks to my science teacher, who always tells us about how the world nowadays appreciate science, I feel really inspired to become a scientist in the future. Until now, that is the biggest motivation for me to keep study harder and harder to get high result in school.
Admittedly that sometimes, teachers' views might be subjective and result in bad influences on students. However, I strongly believe that the problem is in the way of expression. If teachers could stay objective and provide exact facts and datas with careful researchs, we do not need to worry about any negative effect of their views on the students.
With those aforementioned points, I firmly believe that it is important for teachers to introduce their social and political views to students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72476787188 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2003020341 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371885478067 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11433771108 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132386250654 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23663987431 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405176044298 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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