AGREE OR DISSAGREE?
CHILDREN SHOULD NOT HAVE TO WORK OR HELP WITH HOUSEHOLD TASKS; THEIR ONLY RESPONSIBILITY SHOULD BE TO STUDY.
AGREE OR DISSAGREE?
CHILDREN SHOULD NOT HAVE TO WORK OR HELP WITH HOUSEHOLD TASKS; THEIR ONLY RESPONSIBILITY SHOULD BE TO STUDY.
In my view life is not free. You must pay for everything and it does not make a change whether you are an adult or a child. Everyone must do something in their life and surely as a member of a family there will be so many things that each member is responsible for doing it. No matter how old you are, you must do something to pay back for what you have got from your family before. And here is two reasons why I think in this way.
Firstly, children will be more responsible in future. There is a well know said which says even reaching to the top of a mountain starts with one simple step. I believe that it is the same in life. If you want to do something big in the future and take an important role, you must start role taking by doing some simple tasks. In this way you will learn about being responsible for whatever you must do or you have done. If children do some simple works at home; for example, if they clean up their room by their own, they will learn that there are some works that will be done if only they do that and no one else will be responsible for that. also children will learn that all of their works will be evaluated by others and if they do not do their work in a good way they must accept the thing which will happen in the future in the sequence. I do not mean that we must punish children for not doing their work in the best way, I just want to say that children must learn each action they do will have some results and sequences. Some of these results will be good and unfortunately some of them will be bad. I remember when I was six years old my mother told me to clean up my room. I just came to my room and pretended that I am cleaning up but when she came to my room and saw I did not do my work she said “ok, we will not go to the park this evening” and I think it was the worst punishment for a child. It is not too bad but it can teach children to be responsible for their work, in other way they will miss something nice.
Secondly, doing some household tasks will teach some lessons about life. Maybe it seems strange in the first sight but it is real. If children be asked to do some household tasks they will learn that each person must do something to pay back for everything he/she had got before. In my view, life is not that much kind to give you so many things for free. It will take something and gives you back something else. Children by doing household tasks will learn that they can be a positive member of the family and have a good and positive effect on the family. I remember the first time that my father asked me to go out and buy a loaf of bread I said to myself “wow, now you are a lady who can help others and people can ask you for a help.” It was a really nice feeling that I even now remember it.
To cut the long story short, in my view, doing household tasks will help children to learn so many different things in an easy way and also can give them this positive feeling that they can have a role and do something for someone. It can help them to grow their self-confidence and believe that no matter how much young they are; they can be a positive person for the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 38.0 9.8082437276 387% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 104.0 43.0788530466 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2661.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 648.0 407.700716846 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10648148148 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18061562305 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.361111111111 0.524837075471 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1511879855 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0357142857 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245635687473 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932220754247 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167045418289 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261170892256 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.319696682845 0.0645574589148 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 8.01818996416 74% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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