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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship

Everyone wanted a long-lasting relationship with every people. This relationship plays important role in our life. In my opinion the telling truth is the vital part of relationship. I have two reasons for it, which I will explain in this essay.
Firstly, truth is the foundation of trust. This trust turns in to the love among the individual in relationship. If you always tell truth to your partner, it will develop the long-lasting relation. My own personality is great example for this statement. For example, I am always telling truth to my parents, to my best friend and it will make my relation stronger. If I am telling lie to them and in the end if they realise, he/she was telling wrong things to me then they lose trust on me. Ultimately, it weakens our relationship. Therefore, because of this reason the truth become vital part of relations.
Moreover, it is better to telling truth then feel the fear of being exposed after telling the lie. Once any person telling lie to his partner, they always have fear inside their own soul. That type of condition also inhibits the confident mindset and developed the evil character in the individual . For instance, I never have the fear of being exposed because I always true to my parents. Also, they do not have doubt that their children will telling lie to them. Therefore, because of this habit I have somewhat better personality in my street and they always trust on me.
In conclusion, I am in the opinion that if you want better relation with others then you must develop one habit, that is telling truth to everyone. Because it developed important pillar of relation that is trust and because it eliminates the fear of being exposed by others

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75420875421 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65914984147 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461279461279 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8746861455 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.85 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278279261027 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920634157806 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656539142183 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174943193326 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050696664473 0.0645574589148 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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