Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
It is often argued that having a huge pay-out is more necessary than the contentment of the job itself. I do not agree with this statement and will provide further details in the course of this essay.
To commence with, job satisfaction is fundamental in order to attain satisfaction and progress in any field. This can be attained if an individual is happy with their profession. For instance, there are scientists who are passionate about their role and contribution to society, the satisfaction obtained after a breakthrough is to be nowhere compared to any monetary benefits. Similarly, individuals who pursue their profession out of hobbies tend to be more successful as well.
Furthermore, selecting a career or a profession solely based on monetary benefits leads to demotivation and low performance. It might seem tempting to choose a path that guarantees financial security, there is a high chance that we might give up over time. A banking professional, for example, select to work in a bank due to the guaranteed high package offered by the employer. If he/she does not feel content, it might lead to demotivation and poor performance at work.
In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of this topic, although it is practical to opt for a path that pays better for a better standard of living, it should not be the only criteria to take into consideration while opting for a job. I believe that it is essential to be content and satisfied with our personal and professional development.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate about their role and contribution to society, the satisfaction obtained after...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09640450036 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.874516401 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931947440135 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346380762076 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458406610049 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628910512765 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635860588449 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate about their role and contribution to society, the satisfaction obtained after...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09640450036 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.874516401 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931947440135 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346380762076 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458406610049 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628910512765 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635860588449 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.