Classes should be required or not?
From my point of view, class attendance should be a requirement.
I am an old-fashioned student that used to go to school 8-3 pm Monday to Friday and I strongly belive that it was worth it.
Tell, show do, and physical interaction are the key points of strong knowledge.
First of all you are waking up every day with one reason to go out and start the day. Meeting up with friends, or just stopping by the coffee shop before class will colour your day in a certain way. I totally agree that morning class is so hard focus and sacrifice that warm bed and blanket but life it is not only about sleep. Moreover some classes maybe boring and you feel like you do not understand the professor, and I totally agree, but this is usually once in a blue moon.
Second the better understanding off a subject is proven to be related with the writter and the one who is interperting that to you, in such a case the professor. Have you ever tried to read a lesson all by yourself and study after you were in a class about that lesson? The role of the professor it is to give us a better aproach and a another side of the lesson, to make it more comprehensive and readable for us
In addition to better learning, in class we find new friends, we talk more with the old mates and figure out most of the things together. Being a team and operating face to face creates the best friendships and gives the masterpieces this world needs. Furthermore, every class is full of information, knowlwdge, laughter and joy as well. we all find examples from real life to make concrete the lesson and this defenitely helps to memorize and score better our tests.
To conclude,i strongly belive that classes are a very important part of learning and creating concepts that will last for a long time .you are listening, watching, and writting probably at the same time. Three parts of your brain working at the same time, that concept will be in your brain forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45786516854 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49772494639 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8559395259 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193977521427 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668403793326 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812517265886 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987605018352 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109114619079 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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