compare and contrast the knowledge that comes from books and experience
learning is a process by which human kind has achieved so many great things. The humankind have evolved by learning about many creative things by experience. we start the process of learning by early age like a child learning how to breathe when it is introduced to the new world, to learning how to talk, walk, eat, and survive. From the existence of humanity to now people have gained knowledge from experience than from books. in my opinion, i think experience is the best source of knowledge.
As it has been said,"not every education is contained in the books". Academic education is important as it gives a bit of relaxation and famous sayings of people but it does not give you the deeper knowledge of life, which no book can give you. it can give some understanding of theories of different subjects but using it in his real job and life is a different ball game . life is a battleground or big ocean where there many predators and we are just a small fish who has to survive those predators in the big ocean of life. books may have information but it does not teach many aspects of life-like love, lust, sadness, happiness, survival.Just like a baby learning how to breathe, eat, to have a ethics in the future it is all from the experiences from the growth the child faces in the life.
books do contain many knowledge but they are records of people who found new findings from experience . people go to many places and learn many things at the moment so they try to keep it in many ways which books are also a source of preserving it. books can be read which can be useful for the future generation like the ice age, world war, evolution of humans and many more theories. the books we read are all the experiences recorded by the past men. mankind's knowledge takes roots from life, which is an endless source of knowledge that needs to be explored.
Actually books are attached to experience, that cannot be created or thought of without experience and forces people to keep knowledge for future use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, as to, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62049861496 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61029714061 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504155124654 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2609744347 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237050454994 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923056451558 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919281309771 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160658153606 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372440636076 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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