Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
I strongly agree that in modern life, having a good plan and proper organization of resources, is a must. There are many distractions in modern life such as Internet, social media, television and many other facilities and possibilities that technology has provided.
The first advantage to be equipped with planning and organizing skills is that it helps us with time management.time is precious in life and only few people are good at managing it properly. In order to meet your desired goals, one has to plan carefully and organize all the available resources in achieving those established goals. A simple and clear example is that of students who plan their studies to attain his or her academic goals. Without a sound plan and well organizing the resources, a person will easily waste the time and end nowhere.
The second benefit of the planning and organizing skill is that it protects an individual against the various distractions roaming in the surroundings. Let me give you an example of my roommate in India during the college life. he didn't know the English language and he never succeeded in learning the language. he had no plan, at least for his academic life, and all he was dreaming was to get the degree. Although university had provided very good facilities such as library, labs and free wi-fi in the campus and dormatory, he spent most of his time watching WWE matches. At the end what he received from the university was a dismissal letter indicating that he was dropped from the university.
Therefore, having the skills to plan and organize is a must in today's life and those lack these skills will definitely suffer
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 68
- Do agree or disagree with the following statement Due to cmplexity of modern life one should have the ability to plan and organize 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, as to, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90357142857 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77552853948 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2368228104 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197514265033 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718087273535 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561049995377 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124146794426 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357485760498 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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