Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize due to the complexity of modern life. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, young people lack experience, and having the ability to plan and organize can help them handle with difficult situations more easily. For example, I am now a senior student in college with few experience to find a job. Before I started to find a job, I needed to make a plan for my job application timeline in advance to make sure that nothing would go run. To be more specific, in contrast of those with experience, I had to be aware of the starting date of the application of a position that I really want because I needed to apply for that in the very beginning to let the recruiters to notice my application.
Secondly, young people are easily distracted by the complex society, and being able to plan and organize allows them to be focus on their goals. For example, I made a plan for my future in my first year in college so that I can pursue my dream without influences from my classmates and my friends. Specifically, I made a plan to pursue a master's degree abroad after I graduate from my university and I organized every thing I need to prepare to achieve my goal. Finally, the plan made me stand for my own dream all the time when a lot of my friends chose to study for their master's degrees in my home country, and that seems to be easier.
Lastly, most young people are poor, and owning that capability to plan and organize can save them a large amount of money. For example, my friend John have a good habits to record his expenses, and that makes him spend money very carefully without any waste. On the other hand, if a person does not record his own spendings, he or she may spend a lot of money on whatever they want and forgets the decreasing number in his or her bank account.
Therefore, I agree that young people should have the ability to plan and organize to deal with the complex modern life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little experience'.
Suggestion: little experience
...am now a senior student in college with few experience to find a job. Before I started to find...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'habit'?
Suggestion: habit
...For example, my friend John have a good habits to record his expenses, and that makes ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38814016173 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46038054763 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495956873315 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2190542994 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272399024719 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12867034993 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14031321963 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248850506305 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170459706615 0.0645574589148 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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