Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In todays society with many distractions and responsibilities. In the modern world there are many distractions. This includes but is not limited to movies, games, social media applications and many such programs. To have a fruitful day and fulfill the responsibilities delegated to each person there is a need to plan before any engagements. I believe there is a need to organize and plan every step of our lives. I will explain my reason for this statement in the following essay.
First, each person need to consider their health and plan for their day considering the importance of physical and mental health. We should not forget about ourselves when absorbed into our work and hobbies. For example, I always had a tendency to forget my surroundings after starting to watch movies going as far as forgetting my meals. Hence, my body started weakening and I got sick. At the same time, I would neglect my relationship with friends and family this led me to be isolated and I started getting depressed a lot easier. Nevertheless, after organizing and planning my actions for each day I stopped neglecting myself and started exercising and my relationship with my family and friends improved.
Second, due to heavy responsibilities and workloads if there is no planning the responsibilities and requirements for work and study may be forgotten and overlooked. However, by planning our actions we may keep track of our work and finish them on time. For example, there was a period that I had multiple projects for my courses including Graphic design and Compiler design and considering I hadn't made a plan I forgot to finish my Compiler design project thankfully our proffessor gave us extra time to finish the project but if I had organized a plan for my studies I wouldn't have had such issues.
Based on the above reasonings I believe that it is essential for all people to have the ability to organize and plan for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88145896657 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99078878943 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528875379939 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4981992235 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169287941422 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614452881208 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06771791858 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142666197481 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837452636715 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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