Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people have different beliefs about if it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize because modern life is very complex. In my opinion, it is not about modern life. I think that it is important to plan and organize some aspects of life like studies, but sometimes it's good for your mind to do unexpected things. My personal experience is a great example of this. When I was finishing high school, I had to decide on a university career so I did a plan to study during the next summer to go into the university the next year. Fortunately, the plan went well and I could get into the university. For this reason, I think that it's important to plan and organize.
On the other hand, I think that doing something unexpected, without a plan, is wonderful. Drawing my own experience, when I graduated, I worked for two years for a big company and I was bored with the job, I needed a change of life. One day, my girlfriend propose to me to quit our jobs and do a Eurotrip for one year. I was very happy with these because were a big surprise. So we sold our stuff, we rented our apartment and we bought the cheapest ticket flights to Europe and we started our Eurotrip. That trip was one of the best experiences of my life because we knew more than 20 countries and different cultures, and this was not planned and organized. It's certainly clear to see why sometimes it's better to do something without a plan.
In conclusion, I think that we need a plan and organization for some aspects of life like on the job, school, and university, but also be free for others that make us very happy.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d propose to me to quit our jobs and do a Eurotrip for one year. I was very happy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37748344371 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57007402036 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513245033113 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8634471356 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283768354517 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100387121907 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103448410888 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195052091241 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927283334953 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.