Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Consumers should be forced to buy electric-powered vehicles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do not use memorized examples.
Sentiments converge on whether citizen just only can operate and purchase electrical vehicles in order to be benefit to the society. While some people censure formidably this pragmatic, I am in opposition due to myriad benefits it brings.
To begin with, if people are using electrical cars or motorbikes, they are contributing positively to make the society become greener. With electric, this is renewable energy which will last forever compared to gasoline that might run out in the future. Furthermore, to create gasoline, people need lots of money to exploit it such as money for labor or technique. While gasoline will create many high-performance cars, it will cause the air worse. The pollution in the world occurs worse every day which is hugely affected in Beijing, China so that if every citizen changes to use electric cars, the planet will soon be green again. Besides that, global warming appears more precisely recently because of greenhouse gases effect due to the gasoline cause. Take covid-19 pandemic as an example, when gasoline cars and vehicles are not appears in the street, Ozon layers recovered sooner 30 years faster than prediction which is a great affect that without gasoline vehicles brings.
Another benefit that this type of vehicles brings is people can save a large amount of money. With gasoline is going to run out, the fee for it is going to be highest hitherto which will cost consumers a part of their income every month. This means that when using the electric cars, it will cost them highly at first but for the long lasting, it will be cheaper compared to the other vehicles. Besides that, if customers choose to not follow, they can use public transport instead which both benefit for consumers and environment due to lack of cars on the stress.
All things considered, with using electric vehicles, people are helping to having a better place to live as well as save plenty of money for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93272171254 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49746198171 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.41988692 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129894397559 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468998443019 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037539393021 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849889484775 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241886467845 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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