Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Arts including extraordinary paintings and movies can inspire, motivate and encourage people mentally, while athletics provide energy, confidence and reputation with people. Therefore, it is hasty to give priority to either of them, and from my perspective government should spend equal money on arts and sports.
To begin with, art can exert positive effects on relaxing and freeing people from the outside world. When people enjoy a well-known painting in a museum, they can get involved in the artist's mind and feel the magic power from the picture, which enables them to forget the trouble in daily life. For instance, at an art gallery, people are attracted by the mystery atmosphere from the paintings and then they gradually slow their breath and pace. In this highly competitive society, those art museums are required for their special function. Busy workers can get recharged and hardworking students can become motivated in those art museums.
In addition, sports also play a vital role in society. Firstly, state-sponsored Olympic teams could bring more reputation about the local city. If a basketball team can win the first prize in the national competition, people from all over the country will be quickly familiar with the state, which may also contribute to more investment in other fields, boosting the local economy. For example, in China, Xinjiang Province, though remote and far from the capital city, is famous for its basketball team in national basketball competition every year. With support from government, such as investment in facilities and providing players with high salary, Xinjiang Team can be incredibly competitive and attracts plenty of attention in every competition. And thus, fruits in Xinjiang can attain attention of buyers in other provinces.
Furthermore, athletics can enhance people’s consciousness of exercising. People can be greatly motivated when they see players representing the country win the champion. Although not everyone is capable of beating other athletics, the spirit of working inspires the whole country. People could form a good habit of working out in the gym or jogging in the park and there is an excellent chance that they will ask their kids to play sports after school to keep healthy.
In a nutshell, sports and art both benefit local people and the whole society and equal money should be spent on both fields.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-21 | Take | 70 | view |
| 2023-05-20 | slliland | 90 | view |
| 2023-05-06 | waliwaliwa | 85 | view |
| 2023-02-12 | redark777 | 75 | view |
| 2023-02-11 | Ruuluu9073 | 70 | view |
- "Ten years ago our company had two new office buildings constructed as regional headquarters for two regions. The buildings were erected by different construction companies — Alpha and Zeta. Although the two buildings had identical floor plans, the 89
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 67
- Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to plan and organize. 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29057591623 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72777004544 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0558021945 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117382817072 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376043490582 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416401303418 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679929209679 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415055247716 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.