Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years, world-changing enormously with the advent of new ideas and concepts. Therefor, when people want to choose a job, they usually consider several factors such as salary, responsibilities, position and the work hours. They look at them in order to find the one that is the most suitable for them, according to their personal preferences. Some of them may prefer a job with long hours for three days a week while others are in favor of a job with opposite conditions. Also, when it comes to my position, by weighting up the pros and cons, I strongly believe that working five days a week for shorter hours in more pleasurable for some reasons. Which i will explore in the following.
First of all, the main reason why I hold this way is that, as we know, moderate lifestyle is better for our health. Besides, studies have shown that working for a long hours has harmful effects on our mental and physical health such as heart attack, blood pressure and acute headache. From my experience, my father worked in shifts, he had to work twelve hours and rest thirty-six hours, once when he was doing his duties at factory he had a stroke and while doctor examined him told that if my father wanted to be well he had to avoid working long hours. So after that, my father changed his job and have worked five days a week for shorter hours and fortunately he is now healthful.
Moreover, there is no doubt that, this idea gives us the chance to be more effective and energetic at work. That situations cause to reduce extremely humans' errors which means that tasks would be done as well as possible. There are a lot of evidence that supports this idea. So these days, prosperous companies follow this way to keep satisfied their employees and costumers.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I totally agree that working for five days a week for lesser hours is more desirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58000526244 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1745135275 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334868483458 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104613678588 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106583428113 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206587487723 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100879977959 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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