Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays, young people (ages 12-18) behave badly (for example, by being Impolite) more often than young people did fifty years ago.
In the past several decades, the world has gone through enormous changes on both a societal and an individual level. Under this profound change, the debate over whether today’s young people, aged twelve to eighteen, show bad behavior more frequently than young people before is still fierce. Some may suggest that nowadays, people are easily exposed to violent screens pop up on television and are more likely to imitate this behavior. However, I hold this view differently. I believe that young people today do not show bad behavior more frequently than former generations.
To begin with, the advent of the internet has contributed to the spread of education, making young people today more polite and knowledgeable. The presence of the internet has largely increased the accessibility of knowledge. These once-expansive books can be downloaded as an electronic version, allowing even young people in rural areas or harsh poverty to acquire as much knowledge as they want. There is no more efficient approach to teaching young people the importance of good behavior than enabling them to get in touch with the knowledge.
Moreover, nowadays, more and more parents realize that the acquisition of knowledge is only one side of education; another primary goal of education should be enabling students to gain moral value. Therefore, parents increasingly emphasize the establishment of moral values and are aware of the weight of the polite behavior of their children. On the other hand, in the competed-oriented society fifty years ago, young people were only encouraged to study hard and obtain a high-paid job, which is the only judging criterion of success no matter how rude people they are.
Last but not least, society today has increasing requirements for morality and courtesy. For today’s companies, politeness is their fundamental principle. Young people need to sharpen their politeness from an early age in order to perform properly in their adulthood and find a good job. It is similar for young people who take a part-time job. They need to serve clients or deal with the relationship between superiors and colleagues, and all of these require polite behavior.
In a nutshell, it is undoubtedly that young people today do not show bad behavior more frequently than former generations for the reasons discussed above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...people before is still fierce. Some may suggest that nowadays, people are easily expose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24533333333 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84230141493 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562666666667 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4667698302 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.277777778 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320946045038 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100919527612 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856375365457 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191153777559 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410741496951 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.