Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
It is critically important that we use technology to improve our quality of life. Personally, I believe internet usage has a positive impact on our daily lives. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays, there are many online universities with courses in various subjects that students can access with just a single click. In the past, when students wanted to learn a topic, they had to go to libraries and took a lot of time to choose an appropriate book. Also, they went to classes far away from their homes, which consumed their energy. These days, however, there are many online courses that pupils can start learning without wasting time. Six years ago, when my friend and I were preparing for the university entrance exam, we applied for extra classes besides school. My friend attended classes in person, and I took part in online courses. When he was in the way of his classes, I could finish my online courses. Because of the timesaving, I could frequently review the subjects I thought about and solve more examples to master the topic. Consequently, I ranked among the top 1% of test-takers on the exam, and he got such poor results that he could not apply to his favorite university.
Furthermore, using the internet as a communication tool can benefit us by making us happier. Nowadays, the internet provides us with ways to chat or have video calls with our family and friends worldwide. This opportunity helps us access our relatives whenever we want it quickly. For instance, I spent the last six years of my life away from my family to gain skills at university. Whenever I feel depressed or lonely, I take a video call with my mother and talk to her about my problems and the obstacles I face. Additionally, I can speak with my little sisters, which cheers me up. As another example, my friend met his girlfriend on Instagram. They have a video call every day, and he wants to move to his girlfriend’s city and marry her. He thinks he has a happier life with her.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the internet can improve our lives and help us learn and grow into who we want to be. This is because online classes can save us time to learn and practice more, and social media and messengers can get people closer to each other despite their location.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65301204819 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58137865292 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549397590361 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3990716634 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9565217391 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850500099642 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278410065715 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358719626617 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609583576473 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453929847987 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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