Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it's established beyound the doubt that giving and appropriate idea and suggestion which have been produced by worthwhile people are the most value, but according to the previous experiances younger people most of the time have favorite in their life in the context of art or music and etc. They are really influential in their future, the celebrities behaivior diectly affect on the younger people. Hence, I firmly asserted that I am agree with this statements which famous entertainers and athletes are more effective and important for younger people on account of meany reasons which three of them are as follows:
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that during the youth age all of the younger people captivated with celebrities and these event is incredible. By way of the example, in the context of footbal game the mejority of boys eager to be such as MESI or RONALDO. Hence, the life style and even food or intertainment of them are immitated with younger people. According to the scientific project these type of behaiviour from younger people have to be control, due to meany detrimentals event will be occur in the future.
Furthermore, younger people try to be famous the same as celebrities, thererfore, they do meany work which are not appropriate for them. The younger people demonstrate their life as far as their age. For instance, the celebrities always paricipate in party, smoking or even they are not courteous; additionally, based on availability of technology every subject are clear and younger people immedietly can know the newest news about them which non of them are not sutible for them. Some time their parents try to comminucate with younger people and consult in thdifferent subjects, but they are not pay attention to them.
Finally, it is noteceable to be mentioned that this relation among younger people and celebrities have positive aspect, for example the mejority of them try to participate in charity or helping the poor people, these vision are influential for younger people. Also, the younger people will learn the lots of experience from them which are valuable even if that are not positve but can affect on them as soon as possible.
To put it all in nutsell, opinions which are consider by younger people have been directly make their character and personality, therefore are important for them. But it should be consider by parents that if they could have influential relationship with their younger people, they can control them in any situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...eir life in the context of art or music and etc. They are really influential in their fu...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ture, the celebrities behaivior diectly affect on the younger people. Hence, I firmly ass...
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Suggestion: agreed
...ple. Hence, I firmly asserted that I am agree with this statements which famous enter...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... I firmly asserted that I am agree with this statements which famous entertainers an...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'these events'?
Suggestion: this event; these events
... people captivated with celebrities and these event is incredible. By way of the example, i...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...le even if that are not positve but can affect on them as soon as possible. To put it ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...t it all in nutsell, opinions which are consider by younger people have been directly ma...
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Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...re important for them. But it should be consider by parents that if they could have infl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04534606205 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74057186747 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45584725537 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0786648815 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9285714286 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208797658193 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932003223721 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495791945179 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137543441757 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503262027567 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.