Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of technology and new opportunities, people usually have some compelling situation to do their works and reach their goals. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of risky life outweigh the stable one. I incline to choose the risky situation for some reasons, among which the issue of getting new experience, having an active mind being enjoyable, etc.
In today's modern world, the new situations will happen when you do not have A good experience about them. So, this is worth to have a proper view for managing that. Nonetheless, the risky life can make younger people anxious by defining some critical atmosphere, but, when they grow up, they will be able to use this experience toward reaching the goals without losing much time. In addition, risky life may open new opportunities for increasing the level of the life, as we can see in some famous people like bill gates, etc.
The second is that the active minds will not be reachable by making a closed window in front of the life, it means, our mind needs to see new things and try to analyze them. Most of the scientists who are well known say living in risky life help them to be like today. On the other hand, people who did not have the risky life are continuing a constant living like the past and most of them are tried with this situation.
The last but not the least, is that the risky life is enjoyable for some people and they prefer this life rather than a stable one. By doing so, they can make their living in a bad or good situation because some of them do the risky works without thinking about that. Scientifically, risky life will be preferred if people use the other's experience and think about that.
By and large, I have a penchant for risky life because it helps people to have a better life in spite the others who don’t have this. But, the controvertible axiomatic matters are that risky life can help if it is accompanied with a plan and used some other people’s experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, well, in addition, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47258187948 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4494622421 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122368731884 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519150699489 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425275777308 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797974726069 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318064829004 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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