Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should give primary school students (aged5-10) no more than 30 minutes' homework because they've already got enough instructions from school in the days.
Most of the people, when they were young, had at least made one complaint about the homework, either it is too hard or too much. However, if the homework of the students actually decreases to 30 minutes a day, will it really be beneficial? Probably not.
First, even for the primary students, they still has have several courses a day. A regular primary student will each day, at least have English and math. Also, there are all sort of other courses like science and art. If they are to spend 30 minutes on finishing all the homework that for each courses assigned, the amount of work will be inadequate. Not just that, students will also have to do the corrections of the previous day, which makes 30 minutes too less. Homework are is for reviewing what the students learned that day, . if the amount of it is too lesslittle, it won’t serve its purpose.
Secondly, the students also didn’t don’t do enough work when they are at school. In primary school, students won’t do much work in class. Most of the time, the work enough in class is not enough. In class, the teachers had have to teach concepts and strategy all in 40 minutes, the time left for actual work is not enough. If the students are to completely comprehend a way of question new knowledge, doing enough work is required. Homework appears to let the students do the work enough to understand the things that the teachers have taught in class.
Some people might say that it can decrease the burden that the students have. Sure, but at the cost of their future. Primary school is the start of a children’s life as a learner, it is the best time to set a good basic learning skill for the students. Doing just 30 minutes of work each day can’t help the students review what was learned in class. Also, if the students can’t stand the burden now, they’re going to have a much harder time as their grades goes up.
All in all, just letting students do 30 minutes of homework is too less and won’t help the students review, and the students also didn’t do much work at school. Even though it might seem like a lot, the amount of work is not really that much, the students can still handle them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...en for the primary students, they still has have several courses a day. A regular p...
^^^
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...or the primary students, they still has have several courses a day. A regular primar...
^^^^
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...e English and math. Also, there are all sort of other courses like science and art. ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...wing what the students learned that day, . if the amount of it is too lesslittle, ...
^^
Line 2, column 534, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...g what the students learned that day, . if the amount of it is too lesslittle, it ...
^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... not enough. In class, the teachers had have to teach concepts and strategy all in 4...
^^^^
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in class. Some people might say that it can decrease the burden that the student...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, at least, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52405063291 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28904774249 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448101265823 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4043347447 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2272727273 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237255153491 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083149814286 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606297470173 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148063502531 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285343010722 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...en for the primary students, they still has have several courses a day. A regular p...
^^^
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...or the primary students, they still has have several courses a day. A regular primar...
^^^^
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...e English and math. Also, there are all sort of other courses like science and art. ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...wing what the students learned that day, . if the amount of it is too lesslittle, ...
^^
Line 2, column 534, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...g what the students learned that day, . if the amount of it is too lesslittle, it ...
^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... not enough. In class, the teachers had have to teach concepts and strategy all in 4...
^^^^
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in class. Some people might say that it can decrease the burden that the student...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, at least, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52405063291 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28904774249 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448101265823 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4043347447 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2272727273 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237255153491 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083149814286 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606297470173 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148063502531 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285343010722 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.