Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television advertising directed toward young children aged two to five should not be allowed

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be lucrative to attract viewerschildrens and some Ads also teaches about habits, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I clearly remember, about the time when i was around 5yr old and on Disney channe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s, water colours, sketch pens, etc also i get to learn about color mixing and thr...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... time parents can do their pending work.There is a study about toddlers interfering i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88047808765 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57454678172 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.155899981 48.9658058833 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.125 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106505760536 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716494644715 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122051353944 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986655479816 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123826623652 0.0645574589148 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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