Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Work plays an essential role in our lives because it keeps us busy in constructive tasks. Although some people would harbor the view that it is better to work slowly and ensure that we do not commit any mistake, I believe that we should act quickly and take some calculated risks in today's fast-moving world. I had a firm belief that we should perform faster and risk committing specific errors, and would develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, the developing nations are urbanizing at a rapid pace, which means that we need to ensure that economy is progressing. Furthermore, today, if our government waits too long to implement any policy to ensure that everything is right, we already lose its impact due to time-loss. I must say that my personal experience profoundly influenced my opinion on this matter. For example, I am working for a project management department in a German multinational company. Last year, we implemented a change program called EPEX, which means excellence in project execution. In this referred program, we decided to implement it in a phased manner so that we could learn from our mistakes and improve in parallel. As a result, we could save approximately six months as compared to our original timeline. As we can see from this example, time is a crucial essence in today's fast-moving world so we should work quickly and take some calculated risks.
Secondly, global competition is too high, making it difficult for international companies to wait for a long time to launch their products. To elaborate, thanks to globalization, nowadays, each regional company is challenged by outsiders. Consequently, if they take too much time to plan and implement their products, they lose their market share. Drawing from my own experience, a telecom company called Nokia had a huge market share in India over last ten years. The referred Nokia company had more than twenty million customer in the country. Suddenly, last year, a new Korean company called samsung overpowers Nokia because Nokia's company failed to launch new attractive products in time. On the other hand, Samsung brought economical and attractive designs to the market. For these reasons, companies should take decision faster with some minimum risks.
In view of reasons metioned, it is vital to work quickly and risk committing errors as it not only supports the economy of the country but also helps international companies to retain their market share.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1277173913 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88285250256 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1417500675 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124259450852 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378665342169 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414109775461 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852384004033 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430505984231 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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