Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Traditional ways of celebrating holidays are much less important today than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Celebration of our culture is always important for the people of the nation. They are equally important as were in past. However, people feel in a different way and do not give it much importance whereas there are some people who are holistically attached to the tradition and celebrate the occasion with full enthusiasm and I believe they should carry on this tradition with them to the next generation. There are several reasons to accept this opinion and will explore them below paragraphs.
To begin with, I believe that traditional events are crucially important for a person's growth. Humans should always be attached to their roots to grow further its like for plant roots good strength is important for growing larger and stronger same way human life works. This way humans always develop emotion toward their loved ones and enjoy and feel moved by the occasion. For example, We get holidays for a week in the fall, in the month of October to celebrate Diwali, and we celebrate the occasion the same as our grandparents, and parents used to do. This occasion includes storytelling, why Diwali was celebrated in old days, a story of lord Ram, wearing new clothes, cleaning the house month ago, and most important lighting the house and worshipping god. Our parents never allowed us to skip this tradition and behind this, they have to reason that we should devote our time to culture and be thankful to God for whatever we have in the same way we thanks the teacher for teaching us. So this way we always celebrate the occasion and it really gives so much positive energy and obviously this is one of the best enjoyment people have every year. In the world, every culture has such traditions that people follow and wait for so long for that specific day to occur.
Furthermore, as we are growing we can see that people are adopting a lot of things that weren't their roots. It's good to be versatile and involved in other things but in terms of not giving value to their tradition and living monotonous lives forever. People in the contemporary world have less excitation and craze for celebrating tradition because one way they think its a waste of time and now as the time is changing there is no importance of old things, which is not true. For example, my aunty lives in Mumbai and she never celebrates every occasion and thinks that is not important and it's a waste of money and time too. However, when she visit jodhpur to meet my father at that time we were celebrating events that make her realize how important it is to growth and enjoyment. No doubt she has not changed because no one can change anyone's thoughts for a long time, and they carry their beliefs further. I feel these are the reason we are losing our traditional values.
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Suggestion: thank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, thus, whereas, for example, i feel, no doubt, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2285.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71134020619 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4664947915 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478350515464 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8995813021 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.263157895 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199468359779 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746469834836 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583733709232 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161498340708 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561380757894 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.