Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With science and technology develops at breakneck speed, cars have become the most fundamental transportation. However, there is a debate over whether there will be fewer cars in twenty years. Some people air the opinion that there will be more cars in 20 years, but I hold the opposite opinion for the following reasons.
First, the growing environmental consciousness will lead to less use of cars in the future. Suffering from the air or noisy pollutions resulted from cars, More people are becoming aware of the importance of protecting the environment. Public transportation, including bus and underground, rather than vehicle cars, is becoming people’s first choice. For example, before, no matter sending me to school or going to work, my parents always used vehicles when needing to go outside. Nonetheless, after seeing the severe environmental problems caused by cars, my parents now favor public transportations more. Moreover, they nearly never use the cars, but only in some emergencies recently. My mother even sold one of the cars last year because we did not use it frequently. Therefore, I believe there are fewer cars in the future.
Second, the additional costs to maintain a car keep increasing, which will result in that fewer cars being used. With a new concept that sharing a car with others appears and gains popularity, more people choose to use car-sharing services like Uber to go outside, instead of driving by themselves. My friend Susan is a convincing example of this agreement. She has calculated the enormous costs of maintaining a car before. Besides the payment of the car, she spent more than 5,000 dollars a year in oils, insurances, tolls, and maintenance fees. However, after selling the car, it only cost her 2k dollar a year to use Uber and public transportation.
Moreover, the car-sharing service brings great convenience and saves time. You are also allowed to change the car you ride every day. With the increasing oil price and popularity of car-sharing services, the number of cars will decrease in 20 years.
Admittedly, in some developing countries, the lack and poor state of public transportation force people to use cars. Notwithstanding, with the finical supports provided by governments, this problem will get solved eventually, and transportation systems in remote areas will be improved. Therefore, I still stick to the point that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, even so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16708229426 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96908949696 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571072319202 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1625999286 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0869565217 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4347826087 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331261714472 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993145271325 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802452146775 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195923855789 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611241928983 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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