Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
the contemporary society offers various means of entertainment for people such as movies and television shows, which is very uncommon in old times. Theses means offer some alternatives for relaxation and enjoyment, and they are particularly popular among young people. From my perspective, I think movies and tv do more damage to the young's behavior than benefits. My argument is as follows:
First, most movies and tv programs are profit-driven that exclusively focus on offering nothing except entertainment, disregarding their effects on young people. The purpose of them is fundamentally to make profit, and companies will therefore try their best to attract people and increase box revenues. Under such a drive, it is natural for them to disregard the content of movies and tv shows, as long as it is attractive. A frequent display of violence or vulgarity will be used if it suits such a purpose. Indeed, we can see that violent scenes are not uncommon in action movies. Such display will motivate teenagers and adolescents to copy violent behaviors and show them off.
Second, young people are negatively affected in such a way that they become indulgent. With movies and TV shows bombarding their free and even study time, teenagers find themselves unable to withdraw from such a paradise of leisure and can barely focus on study. We all know that adolescents are in such a developmentally critical period that they lack self-control and independent thinking. They are easily swayed by tv shows and barely squeeze out time to spend on more important issue like study. It is infrequent for us to see that high school students read movies the moment they get back home from school.
Admittedly, movies and television shows do relax stressed-out students and offer them an emotional and mental vent. They might also find connection and receive emphathy from movies. However, such effects are poorly felt because young people are simply psychological immature enough to critically treat movies and shows; instead, they are more likely to be passively influenced by ideas and behaviors displayed in movies that are mostly impermissible in real-life scenes. and simply imitate them.
All in all, I argue that movies and television exert more negative effects upon young people's behaviors than positive effects. My reasons are threefold: they are profit-driven and sacrifice the need of content modification for maximizing enjoyment; adolescents lack of self-control and tend to get indulged in entertainment shows; they are psychologically immature to resist the temptation of imitating behaviors of characters in movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32613908873 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95798278237 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537170263789 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0561518431 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.05 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183700505851 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575877987657 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708757714081 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11383559343 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378160862677 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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