Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally agreed today, that friends have played a pivotal role in our happiness. Due to its paramount importance, there is a long-standing discussion among people that standing friendships with a small number of people over a long period is more important for happiness or make new friends. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that nowadays-limited friends are proper option others do not agree with this notion. Although it is a little hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I am, to a great extent on the belief that, have a bunch of various friends that could be updated by new friends has the best effect on the happiness. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will represent cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
To commence, one of the compelling reason that justifies the thesis is the various attitude that comes from new friends. To put it in general words, when we find a new friend, who gives us some new idea about being happy in life and we can apply them in our life. Simply stated, he/she has some valuable experience in the field of happiness which they are unique. Needless to say, we can share our knowledge with new friends in order to maintain a fresh and new type of happiness time. To shed more light on the issue, according to an empirical study conducted in my country recently reveals that new friend increases the specific hormone in the brain that responsible for increasing happiness in people.
Alongside with the first reason elaborated above, another equally noteworthy in corroborating my stance is a new idea and helps that we can receive from new friends. To clarify, when we have problems in our lives, a new idea can help to pass the problems; also, they can help financially in this way. Needless to say that, in the absence of problems in life, happiness is increased automatically. To elucidate on, for example, when I was at university I found many new friends in the first semester. They really help me to have the best time during university time.
A final reason, which approved the benefits of new friends, is that new friend accompanies with new places. They introduce new places to visit them and have a happy time. For instance, when I work in my company, my boss has a villa at the best place with a fantastic view, He told me you can use it. I really enjoy that villa and have a good time. However, what I mentioned above might not be overgeneralized to all contexts. Maybe old friends do not have this options; although, they have many benefits.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exceptions, which are excluded from the general rule. I do agree that always-new fiends have a good effect on my happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, really, so, for example, for instance, in general, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72304439746 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68696968809 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503171247357 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8895254747 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1304347826 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5652173913 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292078647806 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817403657538 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756494692851 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161064531651 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764541426709 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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