Claim: An action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action.
Reason: When assessing the morality of an action, the results of an action are more important than the intent of the person or people performing that action.
We live in the world full of tasks. In order to complete those tasks there will always be a set of procedure. That procedure needs various decisions to be made, tasks to be assigned, works to be carried, etc. These procedures are nothing but the actions we carry out. Every action has consequences; whether it's bad or good, fruitful or not, effective or not.
In the claim of asserting an action which is morally correct, we need to consider both sides of the consequences resulting from those actions. The action performed by which people are less important than the results of that action. Consider the example of Demonitization in India; where Prime Minister of India Mr. Narendra Modi, announced the decision of suddenly banning older currency and issuing new denomination in order to fight against corruption. This action of demonitization had two consequences; one was good that the corruption weakened and other side was that the common people had to suffer from the tedious tasks of replacing their currency. The tedious task of replacing the money was inferior to the good results produced which exposed corruption. In all these consequences everyone focused on the effectiveness of the action, rather than focusing on the person who took that decsion.
Hence, I agree on the claim that an action independantly is morally correct if the good that results from the action is greater than the bad that results from that action irrespective of person performing those actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0693877551 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79248709456 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567346938776 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0631033904 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46043092331 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167566334232 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197155842643 0.0758088955206 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369134917697 0.150359130593 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.227050100073 0.0667264976115 340% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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