Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Life is a biological process where an individual only survives for a certain period. People often debate about what stage of their life is most enjoyable, and they have their own theory about it. However, I agree with the given statement that young people do enjoy life more than older people do because of the ground that they have lots of energy, physical & mental abilities and motivation to live for.
First of all, Young people are more energetic than older people because of their age and physical abilities. Young people are mostly healthy and tough to do lots of activities in their course of life. For instance, Young people can go for adventures and experience the thrilling nature of life. While on the other hand, Old people lack physical abilities and strong health condition to do adventurous activities.
Secondly, Young people have mental abilities to push their life along with works, relationships, and other hardships. They can do whatever they want to do in their life because of the long time they have got in the future ahead. However, The old people with less mental abilities and a shorter to live, they rather live their life peacefully than balancing life with hardship to thrive in a competitive environment. For example, If young people want to be a great businessman then, they can start a business right away, maybe fails at some time and restarts again. They are able to do so and thrive as they have got time. However, starting a business at the old age sounds absurd because they lack mental abilities to cope with the prevalent business environment. Being able to do whatever they want in life is the freedom to enjoy life.
Finally, Young people have their own goal to accomplish in their lifetime. With the struggle and experience in their life, they do reach their destiny. What I mean to say is that they have reason to live for. In contrast, When people become old they lack their interest in the reason they want to live because they either achieve their goal or become unsuccessful in it. What they want to do in their old life is just live peacefully with people surrounded by them who matters. The tales of having a destiny in life is the enjoyment that every human can experience in their life.
In Conclusion, It goes without saying that young people do enjoy life more than the old man does. It is due to the fact that they are energetic, mentally strong and have ambition in life. Having energy and mental ability to deal with the circumstances in life to reach the destiny they aim for is the most enjoy the full journey in human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71806167401 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41615742219 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411894273128 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5925837905 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1304347826 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7391304348 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08695652174 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26020551294 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111469324343 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790583554291 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199882659013 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467972549719 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.