Do you agree or disagree? young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree? young people enjoy life more than older people do.
It goes without saying that the cornerstone of a successful life is that enjoy it, and people in various range of life try to use their moments. In this vein, there are many debates among individuals about whether younger people enjoy their lives more than older people, or elderly people do it better. From my point of view, the first group claim is more accurate. I will illustrate my reasons for choosing that side in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, because youngsters are physically healthy, have a greater chance to make their time delightful than old ones. To be more specific, in this hectic world, people are overwhelmed with a plethora of duties and search for a way to have fun. Actually, a various range of activities that make people happy are physical, and for doing them people need to be as prepared as possible physically. Consider an employee that after a hard week at work tries to use his weekend. He plans to go to camping and plays volleyball with his friends there. Camping and sporting obviously bring him satisfaction and joy. However, for doing them he should be able to climb up and down and run for long hours, which is beyond elderly people's rich. In conclusion, young people have the physical ability to use it in a way that confers them happiness.
Furthermore, young people can enjoy life better than old people since they have more friends than old ones. To shed light on it, one way to be amused is spending time with friends. Indeed, having their company, or sharing our daily life details, or hearing a funny story from them, which makes us laugh, are samples of activities and events that bring about joy in our lives. However, the younger people have a greater chance to find friends than old people. It is mainly because of a fundamental reason. Younger people spend more time outdoor and meet more new people since they have to go to work, and can make new friends. On the other hand, old people are not that much socialized. Most of them are retired and do not have a career and prefer spend their time with a limited community of their children. To make short the long story, young people have a wider community of friends that can dedicate their time to them and cause great experiences for themselves.
To sum up, I wholeheartedly believe that youngsters’ opportunities are more than old people to have fun and enjoy. Not only are they able to do physical activities to enjoy life, which old people are deprived of, but also they have more friends, which are beneficial for feeling joy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
Do you agree or disagree? young people enjoy life more than older peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69913419913 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44491130964 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478354978355 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7884844321 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.84 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.48 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465733898583 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151891643433 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181921374129 0.0737576698707 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.412474650035 0.150856017488 273% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.296478706406 0.0645574589148 459% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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