Loyalty is the most important quality in choosing a friend
Friendship always is one of the most significant and necessary aspects of people’s life. Some people consider that loyalty should be the most essential part, others come up with a series of viewpoints, which many virtues are more precious. As far as I am concerned, too many cherished characteristics are important instead of loyalty, because people do not build a relationship with others based on loyalty almost time, and generous help is the bridge that connects people closer.
People do not usually make friends built on the foundation of loyalty. The same interests, hobbies, and viewpoints contribute to a friendship being constructed. Set my personal experience as an example, the most important friend in my life started in my primary school, we both liked playing basketball, it is an unforgettable time that we are playing basketball after class, we met in an activity asked for some students who interested in basketball, without any loyalty supporting, we usually talk about our lifestyle until now, even if we have not played basketball together anymore.
A real friend should be generous to you. It is not mean that he has to provide all kinds of help, goods, or other something to his friends, generosity is the character that helps friends when they are living in a mess, no requirements, no financial benefits, just self-giving for you. For example, I could not get my degree when I graduated under the influence of Covid-19 in 2020, I had to ask for my friend’s help for taking my degree and posting it, he cost every issue and helped me, at this time, I understood he was my best friend.
Consequently, loyalty is an important virtue in friendship, but other characters are more important. Moreover, people do not build their friendship on loyalty, the same viewpoints and interests are almost people’s choice when making friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
Friendship always is one of the most significant and necessa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05844155844 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93428187462 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.951473641 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.636363636 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176975883866 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707424621733 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432318305259 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103904816769 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253366150675 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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