In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
A living long time is wanted by all people of world populations, all big countries, companies and some wealth communities would like to reach that matter. For a long time wonders of that phenomenon explore what can they do for get a long life.
First of all, there are several reasons for reaching that issue. We can say two main things that are would like to take more things from life, and helping their family members or people in need. Because, they think that if they die early their members of environments could be a poor, a weak. The one thing that causes people live long is these two reasons.
Also, in feeding, people eat and drink so many different food. And, Some of these foods such as fast food and some inorganic foods impact people who eat them negatively, some of other parts of foods such as a vegetable influence positively. Bad conditions in which eating or drinking places drop people's life down. Today, all human consider that improve their these activities up. For increasing of their life times they would have chosen natural and organic foods.
In addition, nowadays, there are many a new technological explorations and equipment which used by doctors who treat patients. Before, in traditional methods of health, more people dead than today. For securing sick people's life hospitals, doctors and countries concentrated new techniques. For example, we can say warning machines on people's bodies, these tools always seeking people who put them on. In bad situations, they warn hospitals and doctors who care these patients. And, that inventions affect people' life well.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, in a modern era which is now people live long, and their living conditions and activities last perfectly than decades ago. So, I definitely agree the statement that people live long now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...embers of environments could be a poor, a weak. The one thing that causes people live ...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different food', 'a good deal of different food'.
Suggestion: much different food; a good deal of different food
...so, in feeding, people eat and drink so many different food. And, Some of these foods such as fast ...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...so, in feeding, people eat and drink so many different food. And, Some of these foods such as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99675324675 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51234722887 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3285114796 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137301392196 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487358370352 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441695770211 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848054925155 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415151373729 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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