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Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
internet has attracted much social concern. many sociologists over the world argue that the widespread use of internet has a mostly positive effect on life today. personally, I agree with this statement.
On the one hand, personal enjoyment draws much of my attention. it is widely known that, using internet creates a chance for people to communicate with each other easily no matter where they are. therefore, people are likely to communicate with many different people who are different in many perspectives. thus, people are bound to learn how to communicate in harmony. As a result, it is possible for them to acquire communication skill. More interestingly, by using internet, there is likelihood for people to easily access to many things which help them entertain. thus, they are certain to releases all mental burden in their mind. hence, it brings to them many relaxing moments which help them fully concentrate in next task. As a consequence, they will be happy. Without a doubt, using internet has many benefits for users.
On the other hand, it is claimed that the information on internet always causes user misunderstand about problems which leads to decline in their work performance. However, it is just applicable to minority. The information on prestige pages was carefully censored. users also have ability to distinguish right information and wrong information. Furthermore, using internet creates a chance for people to access many resources online. therefore, it is possible for them to understand the problems in many perspectives. hence, they deeply understand these problems. As a result, their work performance is highly likely to be improved. Beyond any doubt, internet brings many positive effects on people.
All in all, personal enjoyment, work performance are convincing reasons for my statement. it is highly recommended that people should carefully consider my writing to make the right decision on this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36038961039 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92710066158 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4811644137 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7916666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150347862884 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449274320786 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744091431369 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132185038825 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134158781897 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.1575268817 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.92 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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