Task: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to
travel without a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer
Way to travel has attracted much social concern. Numerous people all over the world argue that it is crucial to travel without a tour guide. Personally, I agree with this statement.
On the one hand, skill development draws much of my attention. It is well noted that self-organized traveling creates a chance for people to be engaged in many works. Thus, to travel more effectively, people are bound to learn how to schedule a reasonable time-table. As a result, people gain time management skills. More interestingly, travel without a tour guide, people stand a golden chance to involve with many troubles. Therefore, it encourages them to self-analyze and carefully consider many solutions to take the best suitable solution. As a consequence, they acquire problem-solving skills. Without any doubt, by traveling without a guide people are likely to get many skills which are very good for their future career.
On the other hand, it is claimed that traveling without a guide makes people too tired because they have many things to handle which leads them to decline in their work performance. However, it is just applicable to a minority. They schedule their time effectively which helps them balance time between rest and travel. Therefore, they are bound to get many relaxing moments during their trip. Furthermore, self-organized without a guide, it is possible for people to do many new things which they are interested in. Hence, there is a likelihood for them to get much useful knowledge and memorable moments. Therefore, their work performance is highly likely to be made progress. Beyond any doubt, going without a tour guide improves their work performance.
All in all, skill development, personal enjoyment, are convincing reasons for my statement. People should carefully consider my writing to make the right decision on the way to travel.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1926910299 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89748616891 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1451832791 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4285714286 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132416155656 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447059196486 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509864836696 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102347329314 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521973629311 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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