Imagine you could improve the town where you live by changing one important thing about it Which of the following would you choose to do

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...reach there. Due to cost consideration, i was not able to pursue my best interest...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ro line. If I would get offer from there , I would definitely accept it. Third, I...
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Line 4, column 507, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
... my dad switched from cab to subway. It result in reduction of half an hour in commute...
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Line 4, column 555, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...n reduction of half an hour in commute. Hence we used to have more time in evening. W...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
... other suggestions. This is becuase, it reduce air pollution, makes economy better and...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2606.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09980430528 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86119946916 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542074363992 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 20.6003584229 204% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3217164628 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0476190476 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865333534396 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207295235426 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286936650827 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063615021095 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033180975274 0.0645574589148 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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