Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to
only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?
- An organization that provides food and housing to people in need
- An organization that gives people money to start their own small business
- An organization that provides medical care to people in need
Having a job is one of the most crucial needs that one adult should achieve that. Personaly stated, I am of the conviction that if I have an extra amount of money to donate, I will give it to charities that put those money on creating jobs for people. In what follows, I will delve in to some crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
One compelling reason that corroborating my idea is that creating jobs make people independent. Broadly speaking, one who is unemployment needs hepl in all aspects of his/her life such as food, housing, medical care and the like. All of these issues are because of lacking money. By helping them to institute their own businesses, we can solve all of their problems at the same time. S/he can work and make money to spend on her/his health care or buying house, food and so on. Then all of her/his problems would disapear for ever.
Another compelling reason that cannot go unnoticed is that to increase the number of employed people cause more profit for society as a whole. It is crystal clear that by enhance the work force in a country, they can product more materials and export their surplus itmes to other countries. Then more money will import and make more well-fair for the whole people of that society. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted research in our country show that during periods that my country have the minimum unemployment people, most of the people were satisfied of their life.
By pursuing the above paragraphs, one can infer that the best way to help people is make them able to create their works. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating: first, in this way we can make them an independant individual without any other need to getting help; second, in this situation we can help our society as a whole to increase its investment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...e, I will give it to charities that put those money on creating jobs for people. In what fo...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recently conducted research'.
Suggestion: recently conducted research
...ly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted research in our country show that during periods...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, well, broadly speaking, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75535168196 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59387434587 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2244698464 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175679406324 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616949350123 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411204107982 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107123310091 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029954163436 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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