Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
By and large, it's established beyond doubt that having friends make people happier. Personally stated, I am of the conviction of that old friends have more influence on our happiness rather new ones. In what follows, I will delve into the crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
One compelling reason that corroborating my idea is that they have many shared memmories with each other. It is crystal clear that passing more time with friends cause we feel more dependency to them. In fact having this sense of love with friends make us happiers. By the way of illustration, my mother have a friend from her school period. They like each other just like a sister. And when my mother is sad, calls her and after that she will be happy.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that we have more trust to our old friends. Indeed through passing several years with friends cause we know them better. Also, we can see their behaviors and reactions in different situations. For instanse, we can find them trustable to tell a secret or not. After some years we can select some of them as our closest friend. And we can consult with them since facing a problem. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted research in our country show that having a few old friends cause people feel happy during their life and release tenssions of life.
By pursuing the above paragraphs, one can infer that having just a small group of old friends is a decisive factor in happiness of person. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating: first, people have done many share thing with their old friends; second, they have more trust to their old friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, even so, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4689.0 1977.66487455 237% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 753.0 407.700716846 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22709163347 4.8611393121 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23840104116 4.48103885553 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.78838742483 2.67179642975 179% => OK
Unique words: 345.0 212.727598566 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458167330677 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1248.3 618.680645161 202% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.669495185 48.9658058833 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.45 100.406767564 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.65 20.6045352989 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 71.0 4.53405017921 1566% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0457033811109 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211020397127 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188369525117 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0148088119391 0.150856017488 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227858924401 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 11.7677419355 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.45 10.9000537634 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 86.8835125448 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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