It is important to keep old friends than to make new ones.
There's a saying that '' Old is Gold'', and I quite agree with this saying. I love to make new friends but, old friends are like gold and are hard to discard. I however, agree with the above statement, that it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
One reason why old friends are very important to keep, is since they understand me better than any new friend I have right now or might have in the future. For example, my old friends rarely criticize me because they have spent a longer time with me and in that process, they have gotten to know me better. They know my likes and dislikes, my interests and are used to my behaviour or attitude towards certain things.
Although, I have met some new interesting people I would like to be friends with but, I still find it a little bit difficult to be free around them. My old friends are easy and fun to be with and they don't scrutinize like a new friend would. I remember my action towards a new friend once, it was something I hoped would be funny and would show my amazing sense of humour, but unfortunately it ended up being an embarrassment to her.
Mostly, old friends are reliable and are always there when you need them. Also, they offer brilliant advice since they are well informed about the kind of person one is or might be. A year ago, an old friend of allowed me to move in with him in his house when I was stranded, and this enabled me think and come up with a strategy that got me my own space and in no time, I was back on my feet again.
Given the foregoing, it is important to note that making new friends is good and increases our social abilities but, it is more important to keep old friends, they will always be a support system when you need one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22619047619 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26977796421 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502976190476 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9089239325 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359998277539 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166020282375 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149335042159 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243430744059 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135907811777 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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