It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
As they say, man is a social animal, it is critically important to be open and socialize. Personally, I disagree with the given preposition that it is more imperative to make new friends than to keep our older friends. I believe that it is equally important to make new fiends as well as maintain strong ties with older ones. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, it is vital to socialize and connect with new people in our daily lives. Such networking and socializing has several benefits in various aspects such as officail connections would help us in our professional careers, or personal conections leading to new relationships. For instance, networking and making friends in the industry open many doors for employement opportunities, referrals, potential internships, etc. It can invariably affect our career and decide its due course.
Furthermore, it might be the case that we do not have such strog ties with old friends, which we used to have at some point of time. Perhaps, they might have migrated to another location or some conflicts might have brought a dent on the friendship. In such cases, not having new friends or lack of support might affect us adversely. Suppose, a person losses his friendship due to some misunderstanding and has no friends to share the grieft, it is highly likely that he might run into depression, or consume drugs potentially deterring his health.
Finally, it is inherent human nature to socialze and make new relations. However, some people might be nurtured in a way, or have previous bad experiences which make them an introvert. Such people must strive to come out of intangible bubble and mix, not limiting themselves to a small group.This would open their minds to new cultures, traditions and habits. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I migrated abroad for my studies. I came across people from different regions. It changed my perspective which I previously had developed in my home country. I made friends from across the world and learned new languages, traditions and culture. This experience also help me settle in new country smoothly.
Thus, we can affirm that is equally vital to make new friends alongside keeping close teis with older ones. In fact, we must let ourselves exercise the interent 'social animal' attribute freely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03291139241 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86973611242 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.080100942 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4347826087 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273350597755 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711466567922 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090458075153 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15346255433 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745875893997 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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