It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
friendship turns into a family, as it becomes old. therefore, In my opinion, it is important to maintain your friendship with an old friend than to make a new one. I feel this way for a few reasons which I will explore in the following passage.
As time passes, a strong bond get established between two friends. friendship converts into family. Both of you, understand each other so well that it become easy to understand what others wants or why he/she is behaving particularly like this. As in family, we know in and out of a family member, in same way, we know about our old friend. I would like to explain with my personal experience. it has been 15 years since I am having friendship with my school friend, kriti. she knows me so well that even I must not have been aware of that and vice versa. I met kriti when I was in class fifth since then we have cross every situation together either it is good or bad incident. we know each other inside out, from our favorite food to our strengthen and weakness. Whenever I feel sad, she knows how to make me feel better. In this world, I could ever believe that a new friend will able to understand me so deeply because it takes time to know someone. people hesitate to open about themself to other. therefore, I will say that it is very important to keep your old friend forever than to make a new friend. Although, new friendship will someday turn into an old one. But as said, it will take time and patience.
Similarly, take an example between friendship between to nation. when a bound between two nation become strong it help each other in time of crsis becuase they know that other one is trustworthy. Your friend will help you when nation will be in help. For any friendship, truths is an important factor, it take ages to develop veracity between either two people or two nation. therefore, it become so crucial to maintain the bond with the old one's than to make a new friend. it take ages, to gain a trust of someone which get devastated in a minute.
Thus, In conclusion, I will say that I will put effort to maintain my friendship with an old friend than to make a new friend due to the reasons which I stated above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41728395062 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43163372128 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476543209877 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6044159032 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.56 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324607549942 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982879484908 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164564644684 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253594744356 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553508809065 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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