Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that advertisements cause that products seem better than their reality, but others have a negative attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, it is not true that advertisements show better reality about products in that not only is it out of law, but also the products loss their prosperity in future. In addition, it cause people lose confidence in advertisements.
The first reason which should be pointed out here is that, there are law on what advertisements introduce. As a matter of fact, they do not have any permission to advertise untruth. Actually, they would be truthful, since these days we are surrounded by numerous adverse products that they cause disadvantage effects on societies, and reduce efficiency of society development. For instance, when the television advertise and show beneficial effects of cigarette on people that is out of law and may cause harmful effect on children.
The second reason is that, if advertisements make products seems better than their reality, that will cause lack of product's prosperity. In fact, advertisement should put their more effort to enhance prosperity of products by concentrate on strength points of them. In order to clarify this statement, I state one example, while an individual product has not hygienic property, and television advertise that product is beneficial for health, approximately cause cease to buy product by people, so it reduce economic development of that product.
A further more subtle point is that, not showing real aspect of products lead to persons lose confidence in advertisements. Indeed, if advertisements organization lose their confidence, they could not work efficiently any more. for example, in 1998 one advertisement organization cause to reduce 90 percent of their viewer, because make products seem extremely better than they really are.
In the final analysis I believe that is obvious that exaggeration is not effective way to advertise products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32698412698 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09405105443 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0073156291 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329059764223 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119319697655 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943944240299 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182349365195 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832721473699 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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