Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with accelerating development of modern society, people have intrigued interest for improving children’s education. At that time, parents should pay more attention to their children. In stead, some people believe that at present students should be paid more attention to children’s education than before by their parents. Consequently, I totally disagree with this point.
First of all, in the past, the education level of parents is quite limited. As far as we all know, in the past China, the government did not have enough powers to support every people’s teaching. Consequently, some parents are not able to help and teach their children. In addition, with the development of education, children can be accepted more knowledge in the school which is quite difficult and hard to understand. Therefore, parents are not able to help their children although parents received higher education in the past. My father, for example, graduated from xi an transport university which was the best university in the past China. In stead, my father can not solve my problems in my homework. Because knowledge of my learning in the high school what my father didn't study in college. Hence we have to believe that the development of The Times will enhance the students' cultural level, which will lead the role of parents become more awkward.
In addition, parents do not have enough time to give their children guidance in training. With the development of the modern society, competition have became the biggest theme, after that parents should encounter more stresses from working, because every one want to make more money on their children studying. Consequently, parents do not have enough time involved in their children’s education. Furthermore, most students need to take part in cram school, parents in order to their children follow the trend of the education. Parents will sign up a large amount of interest classes in the weekend. After that children will stay in the interest classes through the day. Naturally, parents do not involved in their education of children. Such as me, I had a large number of interest classes in my young, I asked my parents when I had some problems in my homework, my parents told that sorry deary, I do not have enough time, you can ask your interest classes teachers. That why I consider that parents can not join into children’s education.
Finally, I believe that some new technological products will lead parents can not take part in their children’s education. With the accelerating development of technology, the online teaching is quite fashion in the modern society, which means children just use internet or some applications to solve some problems, which is more convenient than traditional education. Consequently, parents do not use tactic of face to face to solve some questions. I mean parents just give their children a phone or ipad they can solve some problems by themself. ZuoYeBang is a good example, children can take some photos of problems and upload into the application. And application can solve these problems in the internet. In conclusion, that is why parents can not involved in the children’s education.
In a nutshell, parents are not involved in their children’s education. Because of the education level of parents modern technology and available time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... father, for example, graduated from xi an transport university which was the best...
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Line 2, column 709, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n not solve my problems in my homework. Because knowledge of my learning in the high sc...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rning in the high school what my father didnt study in college. Hence we have to beli...
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Line 2, column 800, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... what my father didnt study in college. Hence we have to believe that the development...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...of the modern society, competition have became the biggest theme, after that parents s...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...unt of interest classes in the weekend. After that children will stay in the interest...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ducation of children. Such as me, I had a large number of interest classes in my young, I asked m...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'face to'.
Suggestion: face to
...sequently, parents do not use tactic of face to face to solve some questions. I mean parents ju...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'involve'
Suggestion: involve
...conclusion, that is why parents can not involved in the children’s education. In a nuts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2806.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 542.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17712177122 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84913147157 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407749077491 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.9 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3891510498 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5161290323 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4838709677 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48387096774 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349012385843 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124902381455 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945144447135 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234612475979 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447063247097 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.