People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
By and large, everyone has their own selecting approach about the place that they want to travel. Most people contend that traveling to foreign countries is the most enjoyable and beneficial than traveling in their own country. They assert that it provides people with not only quite a lot of pleasure but also a vast range of selection; however, my viewpoint is in the opposite way. In the following, I will aptly elaborate on my perspective using three substantial and compelling reasons.
First of all, no one can deny the significant impact of tourism on the economic condition of a specific country. It is a well-known fact that, if more people travel to the country, they will bring a lot of money with them to spend it in the country; this fact provides us a paramount insight, which is the people of the country have responded to recognize their own country, and it will not happen unless the people travel in their own country in order to acquire an adequate knowledge. This knowledge will help people to encourage other nations to travel to their country. Besides, traveling in our own country benefits people to know more about their cultural and ethnic diversity.
Another indisputable cause that convinces me to hold this idea is that traveling in our country is preferable because in some emergency you can overcome an unintended problem faster than someone from another country with a different language. I, for example, have had a similar situation during my last trip. Last month, I along with my family decided to travel to one of the famous cities in our country, Tabriz; before our entrance into city, a catastrophic earthquake just had happened, and all the city was in a chaotic situation. Unfortunately, we could not find any opened hotel in the whole city. I suddenly remembered that I had a close friend in that city; I called him, and he provided us with some meal to eat, and a room to stay at night. Although at the end of the trip none of us felt happy, we were grateful that my friend helped us. This example demonstrates that in some situation you can easily overcome to get a solution when some accidental problems find us.
Finally, my last point regarding this issue which legitimizes my standpoint is that in some underdeveloped countries with precarious economic condition, like my country, if people travel in their own country, it will afford the country with a considerable money rotation; Not only will it enhance the economic situation, but also it will increase the happiness level of the society. The money that people spend in their own country will pass an economic cycle and will find them. In other words, by improving the economic condition of society, all the people will experience better and thriving lives.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons, and examples into account, I conclude that because traveling in our own country has considerable advantages of helping the economic condition of society, getting familiar with our cultural, and asking help from people in the emergency will benefit everyone. I highly recommend the reported reasons be taken as additional information to be considered by people who value the prosperity of their own country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, by and large, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2682.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95748613678 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73487149123 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482439926063 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 851.4 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.3877156336 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.05 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355821731696 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112252177814 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122336109309 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21733567679 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874768836592 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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