Q:
Do you agree or disagree?
your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
All people live to find happiness; some of them just want to go to party, some of them selling their Ferrari to go to India and these kinds of activities to find the happiness. But the people like me just want to work to be happy so, I totally agree with the statement. Because of that, in this essay there will be 3 reasons to support the idea. Such as success, respect and money.
Firstly, the success is so important for people. The reason is their growing up style. In my country, Turkey, the education system consists of competition and the children become happy if their names are in the winner list. Although, United States is also applying merit-based system in their borders. Since growing up styles, the happiness of people depend on the success and this success is mostly dependent to our job. If you are successful in your job, you would be happy in your life as well.
Secondly, to getting respect from the others is so important in daily life. This is a kind of cast system in business life. If you are successful in your job, you are doing every task before the deadlines perfectly, you can easily earn the respect from the others and this respect makes you more important than the others, a kind of invisible protector. Furthermore, to being in this position, being more significant than the others decrease the possibility of fire and increase the demands from outside to you. Because of the human instinct, being these reliable conditions make people happy.
Thirdly, there is no question, money has a strong effect on our lives. If you have it you may get so many things from life; freedom. The economic freedom is the real freedom for today. And mostly, it is the main reason to pursue to people to work hard because they believe when they have it they will be happier. Even leisure time can be bought by money, if you have money you can go to a dance course but without it your leisure time may stay empty. To get the money people work hard as much as they can.
As a conclusion, to be happy people needs success, respect and money. Because of their education system and life standards pursue them on this way and they believe leisure time can be bought with money even so there is no necessity to obtain just leisure time. Moreover, to getting success, respect and money people needs a great job. So, work life is more important than leisure time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... if their names are in the winner list. Although, United States is also applying merit-b...
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Line 9, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fe is more important than leisure time.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, even so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57845433255 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32289933652 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447306791569 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6650806769 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.08 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216630810717 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618209858215 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102107049212 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122778620054 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695099152785 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.